Okay, so I’m about ready to toss this mss. in the nearest dumpster and tell it to go to hell.
Actually no, I’m not, but Alpha Born is giving me more trouble than it really should. I love everything about this story, the theme, the story, the characters and just about everything about it … BUT the beginning. It reminds me of this work I spotted on DeviantArt.com today.
I’m trying to get my story to look like the part on the left, but what keeps staring at me ends up looking more like the image on the right.
110k of words staring back at me like some mocking monster. The evil story monster keeps pointing and laughing at me because I can’t get the beginning right.
Okay, my rant is over and it’s back to the story I go. Hopefully all monsters will be put back in their rightful places (inside the damn story) and stop mocking me from the mirror.